Developing new sequencing and bioinformatic strategies for non-model species is of great interest in many applications, such as phylogenetic studies of diverse related species, but also for studies in population genomics, where a relatively large number of individuals is necessary. Different approaches have been developed and used in these last two decades, such as RAD-Seq (e.g., Miller et al. 2007), exome sequencing (e.g., Teer and Mullikin 2010) and other genome reduced representation methods that avoid the use of a good reference and well annotated genome (reviewed at Davey et al. 2011). However, population genomics studies require the analysis of numerous individuals, which makes the studies still expensive. Pooling samples was thought as an inexpensive strategy to obtain estimates of variability and other related to the frequency spectrum, thus allowing the study of variability at population level (e.g., Van Tassell et al. 2008), although the major drawback was the loss of information related to the linkage of the variants. In addition, population analysis using all these sequencing strategies require statistical and empirical validations that are not always fully performed. A number of studies aiming to obtain unbiased estimates of variability using reduced representation libraries and/or with pooled data have been performed (e.g., Futschik and Schlötterer 2010, Gautier et al. 2013, Ferretti et al. 2013, Lynch et al. 2014), as well as validation of new sequencing methods for population genetic analyses (e.g., Gautier et al. 2013, Nevado et al. 2014). Nevertheless, empirical validation using both pooled and individual experimental approaches combined with different bioinformatic methods has not been always performed.
Here, Deleury et al. (2020) proposed an efficient and elegant way of quantifying the single-nucleotide polymorphisms (SNPs) of exon-derived sequences in a non-model species (i.e. for which no reference genome sequence is available) at the population level scale. They also designed a new procedure to capture exon-derived sequences based on a reference transcriptome. In addition, they were able to make predictions of intron-exon boundaries for de novo transcripts based on the decay of read depth at the ends of the coding regions.
Based on theoretical predictions (Gautier et al. 2013), Deleury et al. (2020) designed a procedure to test the accuracy of variant allele frequencies (AFs) with pooled samples, in a reduced genome-sequence library made with transcriptome regions, and additionally testing the effects of new bioinformatic methods in contrast to standardized methods. They applied their strategy on the non-model species Asian ladybird (Harmonia axyridis), for which a draft genome is available, thereby allowing them to benchmark their method with regard to a traditional mapping-based approach. Based on species-specific de novo transcriptomes, they designed capture probes which are then used to call SNPx and then compared the resulting SNP AFs at the individual (multiplexed) versus population (pooled) levels. Interestingly, they showed that SNP AFs in the pool sequencing strategy nicely correlate with the individual ones but obviously in a cost-effective way. Studies of population genomics for non-model species have usually limited budgets. The number of individuals required for population genomics analysis multiply the costs of the project, making pooling samples an interesting option. Furthermore, the use of pool sequencing is not always a choice, as many organisms are too small and/or individuals are too sticked each other to be individually sequenced (e.g., Choquet et al. 2019, Kurland et al. 2019). In addition, the study of a reduced section of the genome is cheaper and often sufficient for a number of population genetic questions, such as the understanding of general demographic events, or the estimation of the effects of positive and/or negative selection at functional coding regions. Studies on population genomics of non-model species have many applications in related fields, such as conservation genetics, control of invasive species, etc. The work of Deleury et al. (2020) is an elegant contribution to the assessment and validation of new methodologies used for the analysis of genome variations at the intra-population variability level, highlighting straight bioinformatic and reliable sequencing methods for population genomics studies.
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The two reviewers have now responded positively to your manuscript. Although they were impressed by the quantity of work that is described here, they have also made constructive comments and suggestions to clarify the manuscript.
The main points raised are the following:
1/ Illustration of the analysis workflow: Given the rather consequent analyses reported throughout the study (i.e. pool versus individual; SNP calling within exon versus at exon-intron junctions/borders (IEB); CDS mapping versus genome mapping…), it would be recommended to illustrate the workflow with a schema to guide the reader (e.g something like Transcriptome > CDS > probes > sequencing (pool vs individual) > SNP calling/mapping (CDS vs genome)). This would certainly add considerable value/directness to the described strategies and may also emphasize the contribution of the pooling strategy in the correct estimation of VAF as compared to indexed individuals. In addition, it could be interesting to define and use acronyms for the different methods for a better readability.
2/ Filtering: They are various filters used along both the method and result sections: CDS selection, SNPs calling, read coverage, CDS genome mapping. One could ask if (and how) they may influence/impact the effectiveness of the strategy. In the same lines, are the " ~5 Mb of randomly chosen" transcripts really random given that they were filtered based on their N-content, size, GC content?
Minor points: - Although this is not the main point of the study, would it possible to give more details about the de novo transcript annotation (initial numbers, method for reconstruction, sequenced tissues/stages…)? - line 443 : "the allele frequency estimates obtained with the two mapping methods were highly correlated both for the pool (r=0.998; Fig. 2C) and for the individuals (r=0.998)." It seems that the correlations of AF between the 2 mapping strategies (CDS vs genome) is slightly different for lower AF values (<0.2), with the mapping onto CDS slightly overestimating AF as compared to mapping onto genome (Fig 2C). Would it be interesting to do the correlations by bins/intervals of AFs?
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